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shredded butterfly wings fall from the sky
but it takes more than that to make this child cry

hotel sign flashing, not the words she wants to see
the lights scream out ‘ no vacancy’

alone, uncared for, but still she finds happiness inside
she is gone from the horrible prison; no longer must she hide

Friday’s Flower Girl ran away from home,
no one ever told her that it’s no more fun to be alone

her pretty white skirt is stitched and torn
and the puppy-dog look on her face is sad and forlorn

her daddy hit her, while she listened to mom scream
twisting reality, so it seems like no more than a dream

a ship full of memories drifts past eyes filmed over
she is waiting for her chance, her one four-leaf clover

Friday’s Flower Girl, with daisies in her hair
no one would have guessed that she was dressed for despair

the petals have wilted and fallen away
the young girl sobs, she wishes they would have lasted for one more day

the smile she wears is a violent fake
it is sorrow that she carries, make no mistake

the ratty teddy bear that stays by her side
protects her, he tells no one about all the nights that she’s cried

Friday’s Flower Girl ran away from home,
no one ever told her that it’s no more fun to be alone
:iconangelwithadirtyface9:

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:iconxoshadybaby22ox:
wow...i like this...i didnt catch a flow in some of the places...but it hit me good...maybe it just has 2 do with the past but it almost got me crying....good work....keep it up

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"Just put me on my back, knock me out again"~Lips Like Morphine- Kill Hannah <3

"I saw the clouds forming tornados in the sky
The winter winds blew on lake Michigan that night
I carved your name into my arm
So I would remember you" Scream- Kill Hann
:iconangelwithadirtyface9:
thanks so much :) and for the watch also

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your face could last forever,
if only i could inhale for sure .

jessica
:icontsyoku:
I like your repitition, and the way you set out your poem =) and i don't know why but I'm loving the lines.

"Friday’s Flower Girl, with daisies in her hair
no one would have guessed that she was dressed for despair"

I like this poem. <33 I think I'm going to fave it =]

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"What's wrong with falling down? You can always stand up again. If you look up at the blue sky after falling down, it is stretching endlessly and limitlessly, and it smiles at me .. I'm alive." -- Kitou Aya
:iconangelwithadirtyface9:
thanks so much for the comment and the fave :)

--
your face could last forever,
if only i could inhale for sure .

jessica
:iconsavsie:
Wow that was a really good poem. Ah can't pick a favorite line. All of them are so good.

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Memories pulsing through my head
Filled with things I've never said
:iconxoshadybaby22ox:
your welcome!

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"Just put me on my back, knock me out again"~Lips Like Morphine- Kill Hannah <3

"I saw the clouds forming tornados in the sky
The winter winds blew on lake Michigan that night
I carved your name into my arm
So I would remember you" Scream- Kill Hann
:iconangelwithadirtyface9:
thanks a bunch :) and for the fav also

--
your face could last forever,
if only i could inhale for sure .

jessica
:iconangelwithadirtyface9:
thanks for the fav too :D

--
your face could last forever,
if only i could inhale for sure .

jessica
:iconthehalfdead:
dammm

u write dam good

u just busted my selfestime on how i qwrote (lol)

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